Should i become a rapper?

Started by negerpakkis, October 20, 2018, 12:22:36 PM

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I wrote some lyrics and want some constructive criticism. Do you guys really think i can become a rapper?

(Verse)
Im about to hit a lick
Wrap the rolex round my dick
Empty the mag, the gun go *click*
Im not allowed to swear so i say FRICK!

Running so much from police, my feet sore i got a blister
Run up on my block where i fucked my own sister
Wait hold up i didnt fuck my sister i fucked my OG homie
Im not about that gay shit tho you know me!