THIS IS AN ADVANCED RP. READ BELOW TO UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN.
Advanced Roleplay's mean like, 3 or more sentences, and proper RP format.
ie:
Improper: Rai: Hey Sonic! What's up?
Proper: Rai turned his head to see Sonic standing there. "
Hey Sonic! What's up?"
Also use proper Grammar and Punctuation.
Bio Format:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
History:
RP Sample:
STORY!: Nope, Eggman's not back to his old tricks again. But, who is? Chaos, reawakened. By no, not Eggman, Nobody. That's right, nobody did. But he got out too early, and he's on a rampage. His determination is to awaken all of the enemy's that Sonic and the gang already defeated. Will you make it in time? Or will the world be doomed and be plunged into a fiery darkness? The only thing to do is find out.
you lost me at this
Anyways, My Biography.
Name: Rai
Age: 17 Years (204 Mos. and 6209 days ((I think correct)))
Gender: Male
Personality: Dark, but caring. A little ambitious.
History: Rai was born in a small village with a dead father. He was taken away to be used a a research project, but he escaped, but he had to live alone.
RP Sample: I'm the owner. rofl
i thinkz i got it
Name:Jeexx the Hedgehog
Age:29
Gender:Male
Personality:Free spirited red hedgehog who loves to run free and fight for justice
History:(this is what i didnt relly get)He's got a wife: Leafy. A boy called Dave. A bigger brother called Flame. A little sister called Fatal and a good friend called Oblivion. He doesnt care what happened in the past he just run's forward.
RP Sample:
Wellz i dontz getz this....very well..
did i get it right?
Yeah.
can i join
name:michael
age:11
gender:male
personality:a blue black and silver hedgehog that has a new divide
history:when he was 10 all his family and friends died but when he was 10 and a half he was in hell and made new family and a new friend
rp sample:um lol wut
So....can we start the RP already....? (Or do we just snap our fingers and start it?
Like if i would just post some RP:ing here nowz)
Quote from: jeexx on September 22, 2009, 06:26:34 AM
So....can we start the RP already....? (Or do we just snap our fingers and start it?
Like if i would just post some RP:ing here nowz)
well shadow.kuns not on...yet
Hell yeah a real RP like the good all days
Name: Fireyo
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Fireyo is a Boastful, Big-headed hedgehog. He doesn't care what he does as long as it suits him, but saying that he will never do anything to majorly harm anyone.
History:Fireyo came from a rich family. he had the latest technology but was bullied at school. His only comfort was his older brother, Lunar. One day he was being chased by bullies. Due to the fact he did not look where he was going, he ran straight into a Toxic Waste Pool that was about to be frozen over and forgotten about. He ran straight through the walls due to the fact they where weak and makeshift, and stopped just as he reached the edge and realized. A black ooze (Later to become Fireyo's worst enemy, a demon of destruction called Kesh'a) pulled Fireyo down and off the cliff. Lunar saw Fireyo falling as he was walking, and ran to catch him. He was to late, but somehow, he got a sudden burst of power previously hidden to create a forcefield around Fireyo. One tiny drop escaped into the forcefield and touched Fireyo putting him unconscious but still breathing. Just then the waste froze over, leaving Fireyo in a bubble around Toxic waste. Lunar could do nothing more, and with great anger overpowering him, he killed the bullies by trapping them of air in a forcefield and somehow because of the burst of energy ripped through time into the future. 50 years later the waste was cleared and Fireyo now with special powers, and somehow still 15, was conscious and ready to explore the worl
RP Sample: None, but I think the above history proves I know what I'm saying XD
Quote from: ChaosDazer on September 22, 2009, 06:38:12 AM
Hell yeah a real RP like the good all days
Name: Fireyo
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Fireyo is a Boastful, Big-headed hedgehog. He doesn't care what he does as long as it suits him, but saying that he will never do anything to majorly harm anyone.
History:Fireyo came from a rich family. he had the latest technology but was bullied at school. His only comfort was his older brother, Lunar. One day he was being chased by bullies. Due to the fact he did not look where he was going, he ran straight into a Toxic Waste Pool that was about to be frozen over and forgotten about. He ran straight through the walls due to the fact they where weak and makeshift, and stopped just as he reached the edge and realized. A black ooze (Later to become Fireyo's worst enemy, a demon of destruction called Kesh'a) pulled Fireyo down and off the cliff. Lunar saw Fireyo falling as he was walking, and ran to catch him. He was to late, but somehow, he got a sudden burst of power previously hidden to create a forcefield around Fireyo. One tiny drop escaped into the forcefield and touched Fireyo putting him unconscious but still breathing. Just then the waste froze over, leaving Fireyo in a bubble around Toxic waste. Lunar could do nothing more, and with great anger overpowering him, he killed the bullies by trapping them of air in a forcefield and somehow because of the burst of energy ripped through time into the future. 50 years later the waste was cleared and Fireyo now with special powers, and somehow still 15, was conscious and ready to explore the worl
RP Sample: None, but I think the above history proves I know what I'm saying XD
what a big history
inorite
I love RP's, so y'know
Quote from: ChaosDazer on September 22, 2009, 06:41:06 AM
inorite
I love RP's, so y'know
i lovez em too but i still dont write that much...
Quote from: jeexx on September 22, 2009, 06:42:46 AM
i lovez em too but i still dont write that much...
I love in depth rp's
That explain it? XD
Quote from: ChaosDazer on September 22, 2009, 06:46:13 AM
I love in depth rp's
That explain it? XD
u jeexx u = PWNED
chaos=WIN
Quote from: michael the hedgehog on September 22, 2009, 06:47:35 AM
u jeexx u = PWNED
chaos=WIN
i getz PWND all the time........ and i dont like to write that much cuz its annoying....u need to read it......and others need to read it too....
Quote from: jeexx on September 22, 2009, 06:54:33 AM
i getz PWND all the time........ and i dont like to write that much cuz its annoying....u need to read it......and others need to read it too....
meh whatever
Quote from: michael the hedgehog on September 22, 2009, 07:01:24 AM
meh whatever
.............*waiting for the RP to start*............come on....start already....
Quote from: jeexx on September 22, 2009, 07:02:39 AM
.............*waiting for the RP to start*............come on....start already....
we just have to wait .................... HOW LONG IS THIS GOING TO TAKE
Quote from: michael the hedgehog on September 22, 2009, 07:05:44 AM
we just have to wait .................... HOW LONG IS THIS GOING TO TAKE
DUDE, he's not ON! If he ain't on, he can't start the roleplay.
Anyway, I'll join the roleplay soon, but I just need to come up with another story for Arrow...
It would help if there was a story to this :/
On it Gleech. :3 and guys, you could have just started ROFL
lets get started then
Michael turned round and saw rai "hey rai whats happening dog"
Michael then turned hungry and bored and walked off
"man im hungry"
^ Needs 2 more sentences.
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Jeexx:*Been running around town all day* Phew! Im tired...*Goes get something to drink*
WHAT!? *Looking at the vending machine thats empty*
I wasted 1$ for a soda i wont even get T.T
^ Needs proper format but I'll let pass this time :3
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Rai laughed at Jeexx as he watched him. "Yeah, It's had some Problems lately." He laughed. "I see you need a drink? Here." His hand shot darkness out of it and then grabbed it out. "Here." he said.
"Thanks...i guess" Jeexx said and took the can and started to drink. "Wow! This is good!"
"You're welcome, Jeexx." Rai said. "Soo... What brings you to Station Square?" Rai asked Jeexx. "Just running, as usual?" Rai laughed.
Fireyo was watching two people talking at station square.
"Hmph....this is the perfect chance.."
he jumped out of the Shadows.
"GIVE ME ALL YOUR MONEY, NOW!"