My raps

[Snooky]

Is anyone interested in reviewing some raps I've created? If so, I'll post some. Please post if interested!

[CradledEggle]

Yus. i'm sure everyone here would like to hear them 83.

[Snooky]

Yus. i'm sure everyone here would like to hear them 83.

Well right now it's more like reading them, since I don't have any beats to rap to...

But here's my latest rap, it's not finished though

[Chorus]
Let's go! Let's go!
Snortin coke behind Kroger
That's right, that's right
Turn the fuckin keg over
Take a hit! Take a hit!
Smokin weed, hittin blotter
Eatin shrooms, drinkin beer
Takin tabs, chuggin water

[Verse 1]
Black out, black out
Whipped my dick out at the mall
And then I set a fire
In the motherfuckin hall
Took a hit! Took a hit!
Of some PCP, then some THC
And some CBD, then some LSD
B- L- U- N- T
Smoked a fatty then got rolled
On some ecstasy

[Chorus]

[Verse 2]
Freak shit, freak shit
Yeah, I'm fuckin blazed
My body's numb
It hit me like a train
Rollin around
On the floor in K-mart
Bumpin into
All the shoppin carts

[Bridge]
I'm high, drunk, fucked up,
trippin and rolled
I'm on weed, acid, shrooms,
watchin me unfold
Snappin to reality and
Snappin right back
To me walkin in the middle
Of the fucking train tracks
This is dangerous but
I don't give a fuck
Now take the shit
And it will fuck you up

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
Came down, came down
Straigh-up into the ground
Did a faceplant
And passed the fuck out
Now I'm stuck
In Mexico, not again!
Oh well fuck it,
That trip was the shit

Yeah, it's about drugs.