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GENERAL => Art & Music => Topic started by: Dracoslythe on Mar 3, 2009 07:27 AM

Title: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: Dracoslythe on Mar 3, 2009 07:27 AM
So we had to write these personification poems for my English 9 class.  We had to choose a topic from nature, and then answer these questions;;

Who am I (indirectly speaking.  We weren't allowed to come out and say it.)?

What color am I?

How do I move?

What kind of wings to I have (metaphorically speaking)?

What is our fears?

What do I eat?

What does God like about me?

Have makes me happy?  Angry?

Where was I at the beginning of the world?

What am I looking for?

Where do I sleep?

(Optional)What is my name (directly saying that "I am *blank*")?





Here's mine:




I am eternal nothingness, lifeless and tainted

A color I have not- every color I am

My movement is unique, as I am everywhere

On broken wings of lucid transgression, misery calls

I have no fears, for I am as Death

Everything is the prey that I swallow each day

Rejected by man, I belong to God as a divider of time

Happy I am not, for life itself angers me

I was the beginning of the world, and the end I shall be

Answers are what I seek- a definition, an absolution

I never rest, for I am a masked actor of the night

I am darkness- untamed as a lion.
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: Hakudamashi on Mar 3, 2009 12:12 PM
And I thought I had enough reasons to fear u
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: Dracoslythe on Mar 3, 2009 12:20 PM
stfu.  :P
You're just jealous that I write better poetry than you.
I have a nice calm one...somewhere...XD
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: Hakudamashi on Mar 3, 2009 02:06 PM
I don't write or even tolerate poems thank you very much
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: ShadowsOfSilver on Mar 4, 2009 04:42 AM
Omg, I wanna do one of theeese ones. xD
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: luigisbrother100 on Mar 9, 2009 02:02 PM
HMM... Who are u? I think i have the answer. you are either Weegee or Tails Doll. Which one is correct? I'm guessing tails doll...
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: NeoMetalSonic on Mar 12, 2009 02:57 PM
Nice poem. And good base for a poem
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: Dark Tails on Mar 13, 2009 06:05 PM
Thats good poem :D

Im not good at writing, but i had to do a poem once in my 8th grade english class.

It had to be a animal, and it had to follow the same things as another poem

ill get it on monday, and post it
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: chet on Apr 9, 2009 06:39 PM
wow... that sounds... kind of emo
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: SonicFan47 on Apr 9, 2009 07:47 PM
That is one fine piece of writing.
What grade did you recieve?
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: Dracoslythe on Apr 14, 2009 07:02 AM
Quote from: SonicFan47 on Apr  9, 2009 07:47 PM
That is one fine piece of writing.
What grade did you recieve?
I got a 100 on it.  :D
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: JetTheHawk on Apr 14, 2009 01:36 PM
Quote from: Draco.Chan on Apr 14, 2009 07:02 AM
I got a 100 on it.  :D
Nice job Draco :D
Title: Re: Lawlz Poem.
Post by: skyrus5150 on Apr 14, 2009 04:34 PM
Awsome Poetry Draco