Lawlz Poem.

Dracoslythe · March 03, 2009, 07:27:25 AM

So we had to write these personification poems for my English 9 class. We had to choose a topic from nature, and then answer these questions;;

Who am I (indirectly speaking. We weren't allowed to come out and say it.)?

What color am I?

How do I move?

What kind of wings to I have (metaphorically speaking)?

What is our fears?

What do I eat?

What does God like about me?

Have makes me happy? Angry?

Where was I at the beginning of the world?

What am I looking for?

Where do I sleep?

(Optional)What is my name (directly saying that "I am *blank*")?

Here's mine:

I am eternal nothingness, lifeless and tainted

A color I have not- every color I am

My movement is unique, as I am everywhere

On broken wings of lucid transgression, misery calls

I have no fears, for I am as Death

Everything is the prey that I swallow each day

Rejected by man, I belong to God as a divider of time

Happy I am not, for life itself angers me

I was the beginning of the world, and the end I shall be

Answers are what I seek- a definition, an absolution

I never rest, for I am a masked actor of the night

I am darkness- untamed as a lion.

Hakudamashi · March 03, 2009, 12:12:31 PM

And I thought I had enough reasons to fear u

Dracoslythe · March 03, 2009, 12:20:34 PM

stfu.

You're just jealous that I write better poetry than you.
I have a nice calm one...somewhere...XD

Hakudamashi · March 03, 2009, 02:06:26 PM

I don't write or even tolerate poems thank you very much

ShadowsOfSilver · March 04, 2009, 04:42:48 AM

Omg, I wanna do one of theeese ones. xD

luigisbrother100 · March 09, 2009, 02:02:27 PM

HMM... Who are u? I think i have the answer. you are either Weegee or Tails Doll. Which one is correct? I'm guessing tails doll...

NeoMetalSonic · March 12, 2009, 02:57:09 PM

Nice poem. And good base for a poem

Dark Tails · March 13, 2009, 06:05:23 PM

Thats good poem

Im not good at writing, but i had to do a poem once in my 8th grade english class.

It had to be a animal, and it had to follow the same things as another poem

ill get it on monday, and post it

chet · April 09, 2009, 06:39:15 PM

wow... that sounds... kind of emo

SonicFan47 · April 09, 2009, 07:47:13 PM

That is one fine piece of writing.
What grade did you recieve?

Dracoslythe · April 14, 2009, 07:02:47 AM

Quote from: SonicFan47 on April 09, 2009, 07:47:13 PM
That is one fine piece of writing.
What grade did you recieve?

I got a 100 on it.

JetTheHawk · April 14, 2009, 01:36:45 PM

Quote from: Draco.Chan on April 14, 2009, 07:02:47 AM
I got a 100 on it.

Nice job Draco

skyrus5150 · April 14, 2009, 04:34:31 PM

Awsome Poetry Draco