my visual novel script

[darkyellowz]

because i might change it all i am showing my visual novel script, use it if you want, this is for Ren'py visual novel maker.












# You can place the script of your game in this file.

init:
    # Declare images below this line, using the image statement.
    # eg. image eileen happy = "eileen_happy.png"

    # Declare characters used by this game.
    $ b = Character('Banjo', color="#c8ffc8")
    $ n = Character('Nick', color="#c8ffc8")
    $ m = Character('Moka', color="#c8ffc8")
    $ sb = Character('SchoolBell', color="#c8ffc8")
    $ bo = Character('Box', color="#c8ffc8")
   
# The game starts here.
label start:

    n "hello and welcome to the school of monsters, i am Nick and this is Banjo."

    b "try and stay alive in the school alright?"
   
    m "you two and barragering the freshmen."
   
    b "oh hello Moka-sempai."
   
    n " we where just telling the freshmen about the school, and not to show his real form."
   
    m "(he has a sent like tsukune did, maybe he is a human, i hope he gets along with my child.)"
   
    sb "DING DONG, DING DONG. SCHOOL IS NOW BEGINING."
   
    m "(lets hope the freshmen cam servive being at this school.) come on now, lets get going to your class, i'm your homeroom teacher for this year."
   
    bo"(i rember rumors about this school.)"
   
    bo"(how a human enrolled.)"
   
    bo"(and how a vampire gave him blood.) excuse me Moka-sempai."
   
    m "yes?"
   
    bo"are you a vampire?"
   
    m "*stops walking and is shocked* ...(how did he know? i didn't even reveal it to him, we have a bright one here.)"
   
    bo"i just want to know, because i have heard rumors about this school, you where in them."
   
    m "yes... i am a vampire, but i do not like to tell other people. *terns around and puts hands on the chest area* this rosery keeps the vampire me at bay."
   
    bo"(WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO BE LOOKING AT! HER BREASTS OR THE CROSS!) *nose starts to bleed*"
   
    m "are you alright Box-kun?"
   
    bo"yeah, just a nosebleed (why did i have to nose bleed?)"
   
    m "*stares at Box's blood and moves closer to him* (what am i doing!)"

[~Bubblicious~]

Seems an awful lot like Rosario + Vampire

[darkyellowz]

Seems an awful lot like Rosario + Vampire

its what went through my mind whilst making this, so i will be twisting the story line, like putting yogi bear into it and all that.

[~Bubblicious~]

its what went through my mind whilst making this, so i will be twisting the story line, like putting yogi bear into it and all that.

So this isn't original at all? What's the point in creating something if you're stealing other plot lines?
Unless this is a fan comic, in that case, carry on.

[darkyellowz]

So this isn't original at all? What's the point in creating something if you're stealing other plot lines?
Unless this is a fan comic, in that case, carry on.

Silly, i'm not realeasing this when i am finnished, besides, i already made up a name for the new snow woman.