random thing i thought up.

[Darkyellowz]

"I changed for you, yet you don't see me, as i blend in, i think of you, why must you ignore me...?"

Yes, i'm making a love thing, for a story, can you guys tell me if its good or not?

[Tanassy]

"I changed for you, yet you don't see me, as i blend in, i think of you, why must you ignore me...?"

Yes, i'm making a love thing, for a story, can you guys tell me if its good or not?

Wow that's alot of commas. Otherwise it's a good start.