My little 'book'

[Tavy]

I'm trying to make a 'book' of my char's story...
This is the story I made, it is my art...
The guys who RP whit me will understand more, this is like a story from a book...
I hope you'll like it

Chapter 1: (How it all begun)

The science was so evolving, the scientists where discovering new and new stuff and things they can do...
One day they discovered that they can obtain new species by putting gens from one species into other's female ovules of the other species... They where unclear, they didn't know what they can discover, they then studied deep into the genetical structure and found out that geens can do a lot of changes to the posesor...
Kinda a nasty ideea....
The scientists started a test, they wanted to obtain super-humans, they posted their ideea and almost no one wanted to be involved... Just a woman, Mrs Brauss offered to be the one who can try... She was so sad for having no children, so she tried even this to get them... It was the first try, she was happy, after she was w/ child, but she didn't know what child she may have....
After some time it came her time to birth, after she got implanted into her ovule some geens... The time came for her to birth and she brought birth of 2 sons. They looked just like humans, but w/ big eyes. So sad she never had the chance to see them, it was the first such try, so she died at birth... at least she was Repented and went to Heaven, a beautiful place, but we can only hope....
Back to the story! The kids where tooken to the lab, and they where perfectly healthy... how good : D They where tooken to the adoption and got adopted by a man, what a kind person... He took the name 'Mr Brauss' but no one knows his true name... He rised the kids like his own sons and teached them good things,...
While they got bigger they didn't grow so tall, they where like 1 metre 20 centimeters tall at the age of 14... One grew grey hair, and other blue hair. They had no ideea of their special genetical-inherted powers....
The blue one's name was Sony and the other's name was Sam. Sony was very active, very friendly, even if kids where teasing them for their wierd look. The other one was more lonely, he likes to be away from the world and dream.... and think....
They got teenagers! Now they had to go to grade 7, so they decided to go to other school. They didn't know what surprise awaited them where they where going... they didn't know they are not teh only mutants...
They where going to a school from Romania, called 'School 001', in Arad.
After the summer vacation they looked kinda diffrent, resembling Sonic the Hedgehog or sorta... Just that they wore clothes like humans....
Sony had a big face, blue, long hair, green eyes and he wore usually trainings and t-shirts. He had a lot of pimples, well, like all teens got pimples....
Sam had a more thin face, big cheeks and dark hair. His hair was not that long, but neither  too short... He has a big Sonic nose, unlike Sony's shorter nose and Sam looked more angry, more like a bad boy... even if he wasn't... yet...He liked to wear dark clothes


This was just the begining, Chapter 2, coming soon I hope you'll enjoy my 'book' XD Belive me, I'm as curious as you what will happen when they get to the school !
PS: print this out so your eyes may not hurt that much from the PC pixels

Say what you think about it!

[Tavy]

Well, after a long, curious wait.... here's what happens next...

Chapter 2 : The day at school


The summer vacation was almost ended. Sam and Sony where very anxious about tomorow, the new day at the new school. They didn't sleep all night telling each other what they expect it to be.
The morning came in  a flash, and they both where ready for it! When they woke up Sony said loud " I cannot wait! Let's hurry!" but Sam said to him "I don't think I'll make new friends... it's gonna be so nasty..." but Sony encouraged him saying "Common, I bet we'll have friends in no time!" and got out of the bed, took both schoolbags and was ready to go. Sam was very nervous, and Sony very entusiast.
They went on their way to school, but Sony sed "We must go faster! I cannot wait!" and runned. To his surprize he runned a lot faster than usually and said" What the-? What's happenind?" then braked. He tought "Dad told me I'm a mutant, maybe this is my super power!" and went back to Sam in a flash. Sam sed "What was that, Sony?" and Sony sed "This is my mutant power! Watch!" and spinned circles arount Sam. Sam sed "Amazing! But why YOU have a power and not ME...?". Sony tolf him "You must have one! Try to focus.... it can come every moment!". Sam looked on the clouds, there where dark clouds on the sky, then Sam grunted, saying "COMMON!" and a lightning flashed right in fronth of him. Sam then sed "Did... did I do that?!" then sed " Amazing, you where right.... looks like we are more than some kids.... I got power over electricity... fascinant, but this won't help at nothing to my social life...."
Sony sed "Cheer up! Aren't you glad? OW OH! Look at the clock! I'll boost, hold on! " and grabbed Sam, and boosted at the speed of sound. Sam was yelling and sed "FROM WHERE ALL THIS SPEED?" and Sony sed "I dunno! It seems like I'm pushing at my limits!!!!" and did a very quick brake, right in fronth of the new school. It was a yellos school with 3 floors and Sony sed "Wow! I can't wait to get in!" and runned up the stairs with Sam in his back just in no time. "I have a bad feeling I won't be accepted here... like everywhere else..." Sam sed, but even whit his 'fear' he entered the class with Sony.
In the class was only one kid. He looked like a grey dog with long ears, big glasses and blue eyes. He was wearing a shirt whit the logo '4 U' on it. Sony got closer to him and in amaze sed "Who are you? Are you a--" and the dog answered "Yes... I am a mutant. My name is Silva Motziu, I am your classmate. I am responsablie of the class and it seems like you are the new pupils."
Sony sed "How did you know what I wanted to ask?" and Silva answered saying "I got the power to read minds, the toughts and felings, I also got the power to move things with my mind, like this..." and focused a bit, and Sony's and Sam's schoolbags floated off tehir back and where put in the place they wanted to stay. Sam wasn't impressed, and whit a shy voice sayed "hi" to Silva. Silva sed "Hi... I am also not outgoing... I guess things wil take time to happen" and Sam feld kinda realeased by hearing this.
Sony was siting near the window, and waited there like a few seconds, until other two kids entered the classroom. They where Dillo, a red humanoid-bear with huge muscle and Kitty, a girl, human that was dressed in blue, with long hair and chineese eyes. Dillo went near to Sony and puted his schoolbag next to Sony's chair. Dillo sed "Hello!" and shaked hand with Sony, then went to Sam, and shaked hand with him and presented himself. Kitty said "hi" Whit a kind voice and sed "I am Kitty, you're classmate! I am glad you came, newcomers! I wish we will have a wonderful itme!" and went to a table in the back, and puted her schoolbag.
The door once again opened, and a human entered. He was schort, with long black hair and a red band across his forehead. He wore a green pull-over and red, long pants. He sed "Hooyaa!" in a silly way and entered the class, staying in a chair next to Kitty. He sed "My name is Loo, Loo King! You are my classmates!" and was focused on his book covering...
Sony sed "Erm... are this all teh guys in teh class?" and Dillo sed "Nah... Bia still has to come, and the other 2 freaks, Lula and Rep...". Sam asked Silva what he knew about them and he telled him this "Lula is a humanoid-hedgehog, looking like Sony, but she's a girl, w/  blonde hair and spikes in her hair. Rep is a verry tall human-raptor and he has a big apetite. He is kinda naive and silly, but he's a good friend, and a fridge-buster..." and then tehy talked who knows what and the door opened. As Silva sed, Lula and Rep entered. Rep has a rocker hair on his head, and Lula was wearing a blue shirt and a dhort pink skirt. Her feet where not clothed and her feet where very thin. She saw Sony, and she didn't even say hello, that she ran and huged him saying "Hi... new guy!: then hugged him stronger "I am Lula! Nice to meet you!" and Sony was struggling to get outta her arms and sed "Hi... be more careful, you almost chooked me!". Lula giggles and took a sit right in teh back of Sony, watching him.
Rep was wearing a turqoise, tick pull-over and jeans. He said 'Hello' to everyone, and introduced himself to teh new classmater.
The bell rang and the teacher entered teh class. She sed "Greetings, and hello, new kids! You must be Brauss Sony and Sam,... I hope you'll enjoy youre new school!"
Right after teh Teacher asked who was missing a girl oppened the door in a hurry and sed "I'm here!" and breath fast. She was looking like a cat, and she had a long tail, with black fur at the end. She was wearing a short shirt with, and large pants. She had at her a purse, not a schoolbad,.... oh, fashion.... They where Black and Brown. She then sed "I.. am... present...." and went to her sit, very tierd. Teach said "Bia, Bia... not even the first day you didn't coe in time...." and Bia smiled in shame and sed "Sorry" .
The teacher only sed a few things and the kids where free from school. Loo yelled "FREEEEE! " and runned home. Kity was lifted by her father and her car, and the others where going the same way home. Silva remained at school with his papers. On they way home Bia was like sleep-walking. Sony asked Dillo what was whit her and Dillo sed "She likes to sleep a very lot, better don't disturb her, she has a flaming temperament!". Rep finished his sandwich and sed "Does anybody have any food?" and Lula gave him her sandwich, she hates to eat... Sam didn't say a word, so Lula asked "Are you OK?" and Sam said "I'm fine... just I can't wait to go home...". Bia hited a street-pilliar and said "Ow! Who put-- oh, this is what happens if I don't sleep nights..." and Lula said "Are you OK?" and helped her get back up. Bia sed "Thanks!" and went her way, because she was going somewhere else from there. Rep and Lula went to the forest, and Dillo went to his house, an abandoned house, he's an orphin...
Sony and Sam got home and said "Well, nice day, don't you think?" and Sam said " It could've been better, I don't feel alright when I know someone can read my minds...". Sony sed "Rest... this was a great day.... let's just finish our homework and then go in the city! and Sam said "ok, ok...."
They started doing the homework.....

TO BE CONTINUED

I bet you're curious, me two, I'm inventing this at the moment! XD
more adventure is coming soon, after the school work thingy, I promise!

[Reaver77]

Uhm...please try to learn proper grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, and how to properly format books before posting something like this..its virtually unreadable to me...

[NeoMetalSonic]

nice story so far

[Tavy]

Uhm...please try to learn proper grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, and how to properly format books before posting something like this..its virtually unreadable to me...

Erm, sorry... please tell me my frequent grammar misstakes so I can avoid making them, yo know.... I don't know what I'm misstaking.... so please tell me my most common misstakes so I can avoid them

[unleashed]

Nice story 

[Tavy]

Since you like it so much, here are chapters 3 and 4... (sorry, I tried my best at english grammar this time)
I hope you like it, just say what's funny and such, I like my art to be judged, in a funny way XD

Chapter 3: Going Heroes...

Sony and Sam have finished their homework. Sam was exhausted after all that thinking, so he wanted to rest, but when Sony turned on the News Frequency at the radio.... "A bank robbery is taking place, the robber seems to be a human-sized dinosaur, the police is on it's way" the girl shouted.
Sony then said "You heard that?" and Sam answered "I wish I didn't ". Sony took Sam by the wrist and runned out to the bank that was being robbed. When they got there Sony said "What a mess! Who's in? GET OUT!" and Sam said "Maybe he left... let's go home..." and right then a scarry snake voice said "Who dares to face me?" and Sony said "Me! Party time!" but the robber said "Hehehe... show me what you got!". He then got out of the shadows. He was looking like a dinosaur whit black short pants, a long tail, purple bandages on the head, no bigger than a human. He left the money bag down and said "So it is you... prepare to be forced out of my way!" but Sony runned towards him saying "NO WAY!" Sam warned him not to go, but when Sony was running Reptile made a force field appear right in front of him, Sony colided with it and got knocked out. Reptile said "That was too easy! Now you're turn!" and started walking towards Sam. Sam said "Grrr, what did you do to my borther?!" then started glowing Orange. He thinked "What's happening? Is this my power? I feel so instabile, like ready to blow, I feel, NAAH!!!" and then a Orange Shield was around him. Reptile shot and Mental Force Orb in Sam, but it bounced off. Sam yelled and the Orange shield expanded and covered a area, knocking out everyone within it's range. Sam then felt very weak, and he said "What have I done... ugh...." and fainted.
To their luck Silva was walking by, after his time spent doing school work. He saw them and said "Oh no!". He moved his hand over their heads and knew what happened. Silva said "I must do something! FAST! " and called the police. The police came and picked up Reptile for prison, and Silva took Sony and Sam home, w. his telekinessis. Silva waited until they woke up. Silva said "Are you OK?" and Sony said "Kinda... what happened?" and Silva told him. Sam said "This is all my fault, I can't belive, I can't even control my power, it's like wasting whit out any control my power, like a chaotic waste..." and Silva said "Cheer up, no one knew about your power, now try to never get too angry, you know now what will happen." Sony said "Thanks for helping us Silva, we may be a great team! Even if our first 'hero' attempt was nasty". Silva said "NO WAY! I may never fight! It's huring nonsense, you can always get out of a fight talking...." and Sony said "ok...?". Sam was in his room, alone. He was crying because "my power is bigger than I can handle" he said... Silva understood him, but he was not able to cheer him up. Sony wasn't very hapy about his fail, but he was hoping more luck other time....



Chapter 4: Deadly truth

Lula and Rep's father was no one else, but Reptile, the robber. The phone rang and Lula answered "Alo?" and Reptile's voice said from the phone "You... your classmates where the only ones to stop me.... I want you to ensure them OUT OF MY WAY!" and Lula dropped the phone out of her hand saying "R-R-Rep, We must destroy our new classmates!!!" and Rep said "Wha--? Dad?" and Lula said "if we don't he is gonna take care of us!" and trembled in fear. Rep looked sad down and said "I can't belive this! I can't even dream doing this... off..."
The next day was SaturnDay, so no one was going to school, but Silva, so Lula and Rep took the chance, and went to school.
The next morning Silva opened the door, and it cracked open. Lula was in the window's front and Silva said "Lula?! What are you doing here?" and Lula said "Well, you know.... we must do what we must do, sweat-hearth" and grabbed and tied up Silva, also putting the chip that makes him loose telekinessis on. Lula said "REP! Come and take care of Silva! I'm going for the others...." and Rep said "OK!" and went in front of Silva. Lula runned off, while having tears. Silva was tied up at the mouth, so he couldn't talk. Rep asked him if he has anything to say and Silva was jsut struggling to get free. Rep took Silva's rope off the mouth and Silva said "What do you want? . Rep told him that his dad was forcing them to do that, and he will evade from prison soon to see how they are doing. Silva said "Help me! What will you do to me?" and Rep said "We just took you out of our way, no one can't stop us if you don't warn them... " . Silva felt so bad that he couldn't do nothing... Rep then sited down on the floor next to Silva. Silva was kinda scared, not knowing what to expect... (remember Rep is very tall, he sited down to be more close to Silva, who was very small). Rep said "I also feel so bad... I wish this whouldn't happen."
At Brauss' apartment Lula knocked at the door and Sam oppened, letting her in. She was so sad, and she said "I'm so sorry..." and blasted Sam into a wall. When Sony got out of the bathroom he saw Sam unconscoius and asked Lula what happened. Lula told him "I have to do this... so sorry" and tears formed in her eyes" I  "I must tell you, I love you, Sony..." and shot him whit her laser gloves (yes, it's not her mutant power, her power is speed, her gloves give her the ability to shoot lasers) . Sony got hit and flew into the wall, then falled on the floor, knocked out. Lula said "I can't finish you! I CAN'T DO THIS!" and fell on her knees crying. Rep phoned Lula and she answered  on her phone. Rep said "How's it going?" and Lula said " Very bad... Get here and help me!" and Rep was on his way. Silva said "Hey! You can't just let me here, alone! HEY WAIT! HELP!!!!!!"  but no one was in the school. (btw, Silva looked cute, whit that ropes on his mouth and his dog-like jaws being tied tight, it just looked cute :3) . Rep got there in a flash thanks to his super agility. He landed near the house, entered and asked Lula "What's wrong?". Lula told him that she can't kill them. Rep said :Neither do I... Maybe we can hide from dad, and live somewhere else, he wants us to follow the path of crime... the wrong path" and Lula said "yes... you're right, but who can let us live with him?" then they both said at once DILLO! HE LIVES ALONE !"  and went to ask him, also forgeting Sony and Sam there (what forgeters, I wonder if one day they will forget their heads).
Sam woke up, rubbed his head and said "What happened? Oh, yes.. Lula...". He had a dark spot on his jacket from Lula's ray. Sony also woke up and said "Where am I? oh... let me guess. Lul..." and Sam helped Sony get up. Sony said "At least she didn't brake anything, I wonder where is she...". Sam said " I will make sure this never happens again!" and went into his room, slaming the door. Sony said "Well, at least we're alive.... I wonder where is Lula now... I hope she got the ideea...." and went sad outside, looking for her.  Dillo was kind (or selfish) enough to let them stay, thinking "I could have some company, lonleyness drives me crazy". Rep and Lula where so sorry for what they did. Sony knocked at the door and they went in the knees in front of him asking forgivness. Sony said "I forgive you! Man, like what happened?" and they told him. Dillo was in his room, guess what- sleeping... Sony went home, and he knew this time what happened, but Sam was no where to find. Sony said "I hope he'll get home in one piece...".
Silva was still at the school. Bia woke up (at 14:00, yeah) and remembered that she forgot her umbrella, so she went running after it at school. She got there, and saw Silva. She was shocked and said "Silva.... what happened to you? I know I hate you, but, really?" ad Silva said "It's Lula and Rep! " and told her all he knew. Bia untied him and runned with him to warn Sony, but he already knew. Since Lula and Rep where sorry, everyone knew, so it was a good ending... or not? ( I mean, Reptile was 'taking care' of them if they didn't manage to do that AND Bia forgot her umbrella at school, she didn't take it, she only took Silva XD)

NOTE: Notice that this is the translation of my story. The original was in Romanian, so that's why it sounds looloo... Chapter 5 coming soon, a funny alien will visit Earth in it, so stay tuned! ^^ )