Sonic Zone: THE GAME(with a challenge)

[Jordan teh Echidna]

Annoyinglad do you even know who shaun is? and ima gonna enter the contest X =3 +1

[darkness shadow]

for those who are competing in the challenge: shaun is a echidna who can control darkness, his most used moves tend to be using his "realm of darkness" to confuse people, but he can conserntrate darkness into beams and balls n' shit

and his motive is to consume the world in darkness and make a new 1 under his rule

and also, he is bad ass so make him act it

[blazerh44]

for those who are competing in the challenge: shaun is a echidna who can control darkness, his most used moves tend to be using his "realm of darkness" to confuse people, but he can conserntrate darkness into beams and balls n' shit

and his motive is to consume the world in darkness and make a new 1 under his rule

and also, he is bad ass so make him act it

That's not a bad idea! his Shaun guy sounds like a complete evil badass, and I like him!

[annoyinglad]

for those who are competing in the challenge: shaun is a echidna who can control darkness, his most used moves tend to be using his "realm of darkness" to confuse people, but he can conserntrate darkness into beams and balls n' shit

and his motive is to consume the world in darkness and make a new 1 under his rule

and also, he is bad ass so make him act it

K, I think mine's fine though. Nothing would change with the fact that he can control darkness.

[Tavy]

If you want, I can hlep you at movelists, just tell me who are the playable cahracters and their powers, and eventually mentality. By the way, since wat I'be heard, theese could be Shaun's moves as boss (not final)
1. Darkness Cloud - he makes a cloud of darkness that makes all the screen translucent black, and Shaun invisible
2. Dark Ball- he shoots a darkness ball that moves very fast
3. Homin Ball- he shoots a darkness ball that moves slow and follows the player for 20 seconds
4. Darkness Rage- Shaun says a taunt, then charges like 3 seconds, and shoots a big darkness thing that will take VERY MUCH health
5. Wrap - he wraps using a black hole or such
6. Pummel- he punches with black (dark) plasma-energy arround his arms
7. Wave of darkness- he makes a darkness wave come from the ground, stumbling the player, like a temporary stun or such

[darkspine13]

This will be perfect start for fan game.

[Princessofthechaosemerald]

"so the earth is under attack..but..this time it's not eggman..it's..An echinda, his name? shaun, his purpose, is unknown, and sonic has to find out before it is too late. But this time, he has some new friends. Meet X,Rednel and shube, (insert draco's fc's name here) and others on a wild adventure to try and stop this evil echinda from taking over the planet"


i tried not to make it look like you were reading the back of the box, but more like the booklet thing you get in the box

and a quick question to anyone who read this, Am i a good writer?

I have my resons for asking that question ._.

[annoyinglad]

"so the earth is under attack..but..this time it's not eggman..it's..An echinda, his name? shaun, his purpose, is unknown, and sonic has to find out before it is too late. But this time, he has some new friends. Meet X,Rednel and shube, (insert draco's fc's name here) and others on a wild adventure to try and stop this evil echinda from taking over the planet"


i tried not to make it look like you were reading the back of the box, but more like the booklet thing you get in the box

and a quick question to anyone who read this, Am i a good writer?

I have my resons for asking that question ._.

Ya, that's pretty good. Definitely better than my story. I like it, nice work. 

[Dracoslythe]

"so the earth is under attack..but..this time it's not eggman..it's..An echinda, his name? shaun, his purpose, is unknown, and sonic has to find out before it is too late. But this time, he has some new friends. Meet X,Rednel and shube, (insert draco's fc's name here) and others on a wild adventure to try and stop this evil echinda from taking over the planet"


i tried not to make it look like you were reading the back of the box, but more like the booklet thing you get in the box

and a quick question to anyone who read this, Am i a good writer?

I have my resons for asking that question ._.

Haha, I like it.  I think you're a great writer.  C:
The only thing that I could see that would make it better would be the use of a broader vocabulary and a little bit of elaboration, but I guess that isn't necessary since this is just a little piece from a booklet, and not an actual story.


rofl, by the way, my char's name is Fayesa/Faye.


*whips out the word processor*
Anyone feel like a story?  |D

[blazerh44]

Is NightFire gonna be in it?

[annoyinglad]

Haha, I like it.  I think you're a great writer.  C:
The only thing that I could see that would make it better would be the use of a broader vocabulary and a little bit of elaboration, but I guess that isn't necessary since this is just a little piece from a booklet, and not an actual story.


rofl, by the way, my char's name is Fayesa/Faye.


*whips out the word processor*
Anyone feel like a story?  |D

Yes plz. a-lad wants story.

Is NightFire gonna be in it?

He's already gonna be in a flash I'm making... But if you want him in this sort of fan story, why not make your own story? I'm sure you'll come up with a great one.

[Dracoslythe]

k first I gotta think of a plot rofl.

[annoyinglad]

k first I gotta think of a plot rofl.

Plot? Oh come on! Plots are overrated! Who needs plots? *Looks at recent Sonic reviews...*

Plots would be nice...

[Dracoslythe]

Plot? Oh come on! Plots are overrated! Who needs plots? *Looks at recent Sonic reviews...*

Plots would be nice...

lol I meant for this game.
I was going to write a story form of it instead of making like just a plain plot. 

[Princessofthechaosemerald]

Haha, I like it.  I think you're a great writer.  C:
The only thing that I could see that would make it better would be the use of a broader vocabulary and a little bit of elaboration, but I guess that isn't necessary since this is just a little piece from a booklet, and not an actual story.


rofl, by the way, my char's name is Fayesa/Faye.


*whips out the word processor*
Anyone feel like a story?  |D

yesssss, yesss,yeesss 8D

plots, ummm plot..fuck..i got nothing