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ChaosDazer

Quote from: Mikey the Echidna on September 03, 2009, 12:07:52 AM
Well so far i've published 2 poem books and two AC books. Now i'm writing some sonic FC books and i have some fat chance at trying to find some people around where i live who like sonic xD

*Point's to location*
*Point's to your location*
Were like, 2 hours away, and were pretty much the same age XD
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Jordan teh Echidna

i mean in my town, school, neighbourhood, y'know xD
Pesterchum = sirJayden


Jordan teh Echidna

Pesterchum = sirJayden


ShadowsOfSilver



The Meph's back in da hawz

HereAndThere

Quote from: Mikey the Echidna on September 03, 2009, 12:54:39 AM
You wanna be good or bad Jeexx? I'm putting in Chaos now and i just wanted to know what side you were on... Until you tell me here's the next chapter, Jeexx isn't in it yet but if he tells me what side he's on then he's on then he'll be in.
well good would be better than evil for me..so good

hedgy

I'm busy with reading it, it's very long story x3
Can I be in? :D This story needs a girl :) And I'm a girl  8)


I want be evil in begin and later good. But if I can't choose that I wanna be just evil x3

HereAndThere

i dont think that ill be a good good guy....so i think ill take the same as that girl who posted before me....if its possible....

HereAndThere

Quote from: Mikey the Echidna on September 04, 2009, 03:35:09 AM
Okay i can do that for both of you, updated the first post and here's Jeexx's debut:

A personal Ocean

Everyone got ready to go across the sea of personal messages, or the PM Sea. Mikey used his fire stone from around his neck to turn messages into stone, allowing him to walk over them, Rendel surf boarded over on his Scythe, Shadic ran so fast it only made him walk normal speed, allowing him to walk on water, Jet held onto the remains of his board and paddled over, while Guy just swam...Around halfway over the sea a huge wave of personal messages took them over, from ancient legends to boring newbie's, the messages ranged from animation requests to problems to conversations to flames, it never ended...until Jet's board remains got crushed by the wave, he grabbed onto Guy but Guy's head went underwater, then shot back out, making Jet fly over to the middle of the group, he quickly doggy-paddled over to hold onto Shadic, but he grabbed his legs which made Shadic slow down a teeny weeny bit, unfortunately this made Shadic zoom off into the distance, also making him trip and create a HUGE splash of messages, mostly spam messages made from screams and shouts and flames. Jet flew all the way back to the group, accidentally belly flopping onto the messages "OOOWWW, can't ANYONE help me?! I'm *blublublub* ALMOST DR*blblbuulblublu*OWNING!!*lbuububulbl*" Mikey ran over and picked Jet up onto the rock messages his stone was making. Jet and Mikey walked across normally and Rendel surfed near them to make sure no more trouble was created. But out of nowhere a red hedgehog came flying into Jet and smashed into his face then landed on Mikey's stone bridge, skidding a little producing a bit of dirt.    

MEANWHILE

To: ChaosDazer
From: Mikey

yHe hoCazDera, nawna kmea omes lhfaess? Dirtdirtdirt (mwehaahh try and figure that out)

To: Mikey
From: ChaosDazer

What?!

BACK WHERE WE WERE

The red hedgehog smashed Mikey off his rock bridge, but as Mikey has his stone on, wherever he lands turns into rock so the whole sea is practically like land...Mikey spindashed into the red hedgehog, whacking his stomach, but also scarring him from the rock. He sat down to recover when a shine came out of the distance, Shadic came at light speed over to the hedgehog, but missed as it jumped over him and kicked his side, sending him straight into the water. Guy, being the best swimmer, dived down under to get Shadic as Rendel surfed over to the hedgehog; he flipped over and struck the hedgehog with his scythe around the face, knocking it back making it just barely land on the rock. Jet came back out of the water barely and climbed onto the rock, he decided to actually help for once so he ran and jumped, putting his hands under his feet which produced another JTH-Type board, so he flew over to the hedgehog, but it jumped onto his board and kicked his nards, stepped on his feet, and sandbag smashed Jet in the face, making him fly directly upwards and land on the hedgehog. Guy came back up with Shadic and took him to the shore a few miles away from them. Mikey got back up and punched the red hedgehog in the back of the head then kicked him into the water, but it came back out and powerfully kicked Mikey in the face. Before he could take the final blow, Rendel pulled the hedgehog's arms behind his back and kicked his wrists, making it fall into the water again, but this time he went slightly brighter red and stopped moving...then disappeared, obviously teleporting. About 1 minute after the hedgehog's disappearance, Jet came back out of the water "Awwww, dude, this fighting is hard work...pffffff......well I helped a little bit didn't I? I get at least Something! Also...where has SS11 been this whole time?! I don't remember him leaving at all!! Oh man...what's happened to him!!?" Everyone quickly dashed to the shore they were near and saw Guy and Shadic lying on the floor unconscious. Mikey went over to Rendel and said "Who was that? He just suddenly went red and disappeared for some reason...is he one of those old legendaries, the ones who were hypnotised?" Rendel nodded "The red hedgehog's name is Jeexx, there are 5 legendaries in total and he's only one of them, I could tell he was one by the colour change and the teleportation" he set up camp on the land put the two unconscious kids into their tents, waiting for the next day.

MEANWHILE

"Okay, sir I say we have the two strongest animals of that group, they say they have an awesome power master but they will not reveal his name, we'll have to squeeze more out of them but we can't right now"
"Well you better, we caN't do thIs alone because we need some kind of Genius mind to Help us Take over thiS pathetic zone..."

ossum ossum and again ossum your doing a great job

Jordan teh Echidna

Pesterchum = sirJayden


hedgy


NiGHTS

wow so imgainative .-. *jealousnessness*


i cant even name my plastic cup... it ended up being fredick fitzgerald falula the IX

.-.

but yea they are "ossum" (my word jeex >:C)

HereAndThere

Quote from: NiGHTS on September 04, 2009, 06:19:15 AM
wow so imgainative .-. *jealousnessness*


i cant even name my plastic cup... it ended up being fredick fitzgerald falula the IX

.-.

but yea they are "ossum" (my word jeex >:C)
nooo..... my word!

and i use it to make it shorter......im a legendery!woohoo

Jordan teh Echidna

Quote from: jeexx on September 04, 2009, 06:25:49 AM
nooo..... my word!

and i use it to make it shorter......im a legendery!woohoo

Yush you are! I iz writing teh nexter chapter nao!
Pesterchum = sirJayden


HereAndThere

Quote from: Mikey the Echidna on September 04, 2009, 06:27:50 AM
Yush you are! I iz writing teh nexter chapter nao!
ima waiting for moar epicness of your story

ChaosDazer

Yay's paragraphs

And am I good guy? I can't tell. XD
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